A MIHI IS A GREETING ABOUT YOU IN MAORI!
HERES MINE:
KIA ORA
KO RUAPEHU TE MAUNGA
KO MANAWATU TE AWA
KO NGATI POUROU TE IWI
NO PAPAIOEA AHAU
KO CATHERINE TOKU MAMA
KO AARAN TOKU PAPA
KO CALLUM TOKU INGOA
TENA KOUTOU TENA KOUTOU TENA KOUTOU KATAU.
THE MYSTERIOUS WARRIOR
His dark shafts of black hair creep across his bold solemn face. His rough,ragged,tall build and his shaggy hunters clothes make him a solid sturdy warrior.
This mysterious man sits in the corner smoking his pipe observing the vibe and minding his own business.His sturdy build calls for a keen experienced hunter which his prey cannot evade.
This man is kind at heart and he is a good friend.He is a confident swordsman who any opponent would be nervous to face.This man is a heir of kings which he tries to hide.His heavy long stride clanks along the ground and he is not afraid of anything.
The mans strong voice penetrates even the deepest cave. His name is Aragorn.
Callum
GOOD WRITING HAS THESE TRAITS...
VOICE THAT IS INDIVIDUAL AND APPROPRIATE
SENTENCE FLUENCY THAT IS SMOOTH AND MUSICAL
IDEAS THAT ARE INTERESTING AND IMPORTANT
WORD CHOICE THAT IS SPECIFIC AND MEMORABLE
ORGANIZATION THAT IS LOGICAL AND EFFECTIVE.....
THAT IS WHAT A GOOD WRITER DOES.
I HAVE PUT THESE CLIPS ON MY WIKI PAGE BECAUSE THEY ARE PRETTY AMAZING.
IT SHOWS YOU WHAT YOU CAN DO ON THE COMPUTER AND WHAT YOU CAN DO IF YOU
PUT YOUR MIND TO IT.HAVE FUN WATCHING THESE VIDEOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT IS A GOOD WEBSITE BECAUSE IT HAS LOTS OF THINKING GAMES
AND PUZZLE GAMES THAT ARE VERY FUN TO PLAY.IT ALSO HAS
A BIG RANGE OF GAMES.HAVE FUN!!!!!
CHECK OUT MY AWESOME WORK:
THE HARSH WASTELANDS
The last of my strength was fading away as I looked ahead at what seemed an impossible goal. All I could see was desolate black wastelands of ash and poisonous fumes.
To the west the black evil mountains loomed before me, to the north there was thick dark smoke rising from the terrible volcano. I heard the crunch of stones behind me, and whirled around just in time to stop a deadly creature strike me.
Blood was dripping down a black sword held by a twisted evil creature. I shuddered to think at what this creature had recently killed. It’s eyes showed all the horrible pain it had endured.It’s one intent was to kill.This creatures life was a sad story, It was enraged by something of the past.My very blood seemed to turn to ice as I looked in fear towards the horrible creation.
It slowly came towards me.I was literally paralysed, I just couldn't move.Swiftly but silently he lunged forward with one great leap.Suddenly I felt an unbearable pain pierce my chest.I knew that this was the end.
by Callum
EXCELLENCE IMAGE!!
THIS IMAGE SHOWS EXCELLENCE BECAUSE THE ALL BLACKS
TRAIN EXTREMELY HARD AND PERSEVERE AND SHOW EXCELLENCE
IN ALL THEIR GAMES AND TRAINING.
SUCCESSES OF THE YEAR SO FAR:
I THINK I HAVE BEEN DOING WELL IN SCHOOL BECAUSE I GET HIGH
MARKS IN SUBJECTS.I MIX IN WELL WITH PEOPLE AND RELATE TO OTHERS
I NEVER LOSE PENS OR PENCILS AND MANAGE TIME WISELY BY COMPLETING
WORK ON TIME.I PATICIPATE IN SURVIVOR CHALLENGES AND HAVE A GOOD ATTITUDE
ABOUT WHAT WE LEARN.I DO WELL IN WRITING AS YOU CAN SEE ABOVE AND ENJOY SCHOOL.
I THINK ABOUT MY WORK AND MY EFFORTS PUT INTO IT.I HAVE ENJOYED THIS TERM AND CAN'T WAIT
FOR NEXT TERM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAY 2:Today was sunny, we were in for a treat today.We started off with the Flying Kiwi.I found it most exilerating and I sure would like to do it again.Next up was the catwalk.This was thrillingly scary. I managed to walk to halfway without the rope and then abseiled down! Now onto the grass flintstone jobbies (copyright).Basically they were two drums attached to a frame with two seats. They were a lot of fun especially when we won the races.The pushing them back up the hill wasn't so fun.Lunch then zipline time.The zipline was basically a very large flying fox, which you were harnessed to ,just in case.That was extremely fun. You flew down it at very high speeds which was fantastic.Next up in our day was the climbing wall.It was attached by cables to a large frame which meant it still swayed in the wind! We went in pairs , helping eachother out. I touched the bouy at the top and abseiled down. Then a volleyball game vs another school and free time then glowworms. We missed them cause we were being noisy, had a campfire and actually saw them and then went to bed. THEWW.
MY TERM!
My term was great I had lots of improvements and fun.
In my reading I am now 15.5 to 16.
That is quite an improvement.
Well overall the term was fantastic and we learnt in different ways.
seeya callum.!!!!
A MIHI IS A GREETING ABOUT YOU IN MAORI!
HERES MINE:
KIA ORA
KO RUAPEHU TE MAUNGA
KO MANAWATU TE AWA
KO NGATI POUROU TE IWI
NO PAPAIOEA AHAU
KO CATHERINE TOKU MAMA
KO AARAN TOKU PAPA
KO CALLUM TOKU INGOA
TENA KOUTOU TENA KOUTOU TENA KOUTOU KATAU.
THE MYSTERIOUS WARRIOR
His dark shafts of black hair creep across his bold solemn face.
His rough,ragged,tall build and his shaggy hunters clothes make him a solid sturdy warrior.
This mysterious man sits in the corner smoking his pipe observing the vibe and minding his own business.His sturdy build calls for a keen experienced hunter which his prey cannot evade.
This man is kind at heart and he is a good friend.He is a confident swordsman who any opponent would be nervous to face.This man is a heir of kings which he tries to hide.His heavy long stride clanks along the ground and he is not afraid of anything.
The mans strong voice penetrates even the deepest cave.
His name is Aragorn.
Callum
GOOD WRITING HAS THESE TRAITS...
VOICE THAT IS INDIVIDUAL AND APPROPRIATE
SENTENCE FLUENCY THAT IS SMOOTH AND MUSICAL
IDEAS THAT ARE INTERESTING AND IMPORTANT
WORD CHOICE THAT IS SPECIFIC AND MEMORABLE
ORGANIZATION THAT IS LOGICAL AND EFFECTIVE.....
THAT IS WHAT A GOOD WRITER DOES.
CHECK OUT THESE VIDEOS! PRETTY COOL!
Animator vs. Animation by *alanbecker on deviantART
Animator vs. Animation II by *alanbecker on deviantART
CHECK OUT THIS LINK FOR THE THIRD AND FINAL MOVIE!
http://www.atom.com/funny-stuff/animator-vs-animation
I HAVE PUT THESE CLIPS ON MY WIKI PAGE BECAUSE THEY ARE PRETTY AMAZING.
IT SHOWS YOU WHAT YOU CAN DO ON THE COMPUTER AND WHAT YOU CAN DO IF YOU
PUT YOUR MIND TO IT.HAVE FUN WATCHING THESE VIDEOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHECK OUT THIS WEBSITE:
http://englishbanana.com/games-a-z.html
IT IS A GOOD WEBSITE BECAUSE IT HAS LOTS OF THINKING GAMES
AND PUZZLE GAMES THAT ARE VERY FUN TO PLAY.IT ALSO HAS
A BIG RANGE OF GAMES.HAVE FUN!!!!!
CHECK OUT MY AWESOME WORK:
THE HARSH WASTELANDS
The last of my strength was fading away as I looked ahead at what seemed an impossible goal. All I could see was desolate black wastelands of ash and poisonous fumes.
To the west the black evil mountains loomed before me, to the north there was thick dark smoke rising from the terrible volcano. I heard the crunch of stones behind me, and whirled around just in time to stop a deadly creature strike me.
Blood was dripping down a black sword held by a twisted evil creature. I shuddered to think at what this creature had recently killed. It’s eyes showed all the horrible pain it had endured.It’s one intent was to kill.This creatures life was a sad story, It was enraged by something of the past.My very blood seemed to turn to ice as I looked in fear towards the horrible creation.
It slowly came towards me.I was literally paralysed, I just couldn't move.Swiftly but silently he lunged forward with one great leap.Suddenly I felt an unbearable pain pierce my chest.I knew that this was the end.
by Callum
EXCELLENCE IMAGE!!
THIS IMAGE SHOWS EXCELLENCE BECAUSE THE ALL BLACKS
TRAIN EXTREMELY HARD AND PERSEVERE AND SHOW EXCELLENCE
IN ALL THEIR GAMES AND TRAINING.
SUCCESSES OF THE YEAR SO FAR:
I THINK I HAVE BEEN DOING WELL IN SCHOOL BECAUSE I GET HIGH
MARKS IN SUBJECTS.I MIX IN WELL WITH PEOPLE AND RELATE TO OTHERS
I NEVER LOSE PENS OR PENCILS AND MANAGE TIME WISELY BY COMPLETING
WORK ON TIME.I PATICIPATE IN SURVIVOR CHALLENGES AND HAVE A GOOD ATTITUDE
ABOUT WHAT WE LEARN.I DO WELL IN WRITING AS YOU CAN SEE ABOVE AND ENJOY SCHOOL.
I THINK ABOUT MY WORK AND MY EFFORTS PUT INTO IT.I HAVE ENJOYED THIS TERM AND CAN'T WAIT
FOR NEXT TERM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHECK OUT MY POEM:
A POEM ABOUT ME
SENIOR CAMP 2011!DAY 2:Today was sunny, we were in for a treat today.We started off with the Flying Kiwi.I found it most exilerating and I sure would like to do it again.Next up was the catwalk.This was thrillingly scary. I managed to walk to halfway without the rope and then abseiled down! Now onto the grass flintstone jobbies (copyright).Basically they were two drums attached to a frame with two seats. They were a lot of fun especially when we won the races.The pushing them back up the hill wasn't so fun.Lunch then zipline time.The zipline was basically a very large flying fox, which you were harnessed to ,just in case.That was extremely fun. You flew down it at very high speeds which was fantastic.Next up in our day was the climbing wall.It was attached by cables to a large frame which meant it still swayed in the wind! We went in pairs , helping eachother out. I touched the bouy at the top and abseiled down. Then a volleyball game vs another school and free time then glowworms. We missed them cause we were being noisy, had a campfire and actually saw them and then went to bed. THEWW.
MY TERM!
My term was great I had lots of improvements and fun.
In my reading I am now 15.5 to 16.
That is quite an improvement.
Well overall the term was fantastic and we learnt in different ways.
seeya callum.!!!!